I liked the original character designs better. The girls' new looks are pretty bad. Anabelle looks like a child now. Candy looks bad. Torr's hairstyle is gross and her new ears are ugly. Her ears moving and wiggling to a negative angle looks dumb.
The English writing is a bit off. It's tolerable, but the drastic change in the characters' appearances has made me give this a lower rating.
Yumi's forehead suddenly got shorter? Without the extra height to her forehead, she is unrecognizable. That was her defining feature.
Other than those and several other gripes, it is very good story-wise.
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