A shame because there are a lot of great art and cool ideas, but it's buried behind volumes of pointless melodrama. Maybe the story gets more interesting later but by that point I'm already checked out. This is why creators should finish shorter projects instead of attempting something this ambitious. Which is of course what Story Anon did with Tropicali and it's much better.

If you are not a A-tier quality author, the more thousands of words you write the less people will read.