I agree with another commenter about how the ending lacked catharsis. It felt abrupt, if anything. I would've liked it more if we got to explore more of Rachel or Eden's motives and back stories. But I do understand the time constraint of the game jam didn't allow much time for that. It also would've been nice if there was an option to change the font on the android version. I struggled immensely to read the text which damped my reading experience. Overall intriguing plot with fantastic prose that just needed more time in the oven.