This game made me laugh more than I ever expected. It was great! The art style is beautiful (tough I think the scale of the sprites might be a bit too small, but this is minor). There were some noticeable spelling mistakes, but those are easy fixes.
I first though that the writing needed a bit more polishing, but I then became accustomed to it and I think it's what made the humorous parts work.
I would also love to see more world-building, to make the game more fleshed out.
Overall, I'm really looking forward for future updates and I hope to see more projects from this creator.
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