This game made me laugh more than I ever expected. It was great! The art style is beautiful (tough I think the scale of the sprites might be a bit too small, but this is minor). There were some noticeable spelling mistakes, but those are easy fixes. 

I first though that the writing needed a bit more polishing, but I then became accustomed to it and I think it's what made the humorous parts work. 

I would also love to see more world-building, to make the game more fleshed out. 

Overall, I'm really looking forward for future updates and I hope to see more projects from this creator.