It's been ages since I wanted to play your game, and just when I was thinking of doing it, I saw you posted another one, so I had to check it out asap! xD

I won't lie, this is beautiful... There is still a lot to improve though. Lots and lots of grammar errors, and the lack of sound effects in some scenes make it a bit bland... I did notice you added jumpscare sounds to some of them, but other don't have it for some reason...? I'm sure it's because the AI messed up probably, but I'm sure you will be able to fix that later. ;p

Now when it comes to grammar... I can see english is not your main language, which is fine, but it's also not my main language, and I could notice all the errors haha. You will have to either ask help for someone or possibly use a better grammar checker... I always use one called Free AI Grammar Checker with is great! Really recommend you using it, the website is called languagetool (dot) org.

Art there's not much to say, it's great, and really stands out, a lot more when she gets freaky.

This is still really raw, but I can see the potential here, so I wish you good luck! Oh! If you want help, play the game called Say_Nowhere which is available here on itch.io! I'm sure you will find what I'm talking about when you play it. The charm I mean. ;p