This had a lovely atmosphere to it thanks to solid BGM and beautiful backgrounds and character art. I thought the juxtaposition of Silas's job with his love life was pretty well done, although I might have liked a little bit more of both. That said, Arlo is in fact a pretty good boy. My only real points of critique are that the point and click sections might benefit from there being some kind of indication for the things you can click on and perhaps more of a clear line of logic with respect to why the choices lead down different paths. I got two endings (including the Good Ending) and I wasn't entirely sure of why the two routes through the game that I took led to different places. That said, these are relatively minor issues relative to what you accomplished.
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