The story, amazing! I really am dying to continue to find out about this 'Kingdom' and what happened to the king. I desire more lore, and more Jestyn~. I do hope this doesn't become dead in the waters, because I will definitely pay to enjoy this even more. The dialogue does have to be looked over again as I came across some odd word placements (Though my brain fixed them as I read. I did end up losing my place when stumbling on them). But that does not discredit just all of this delicious VN goodness~ I was doing voices and reading aloud, and when I realized my reading was getting a bit. . .heated. . .I had to go silent from embarrassment. . .I love it when VN's do that to me~ It means it's just right! <3 You've created an amazing demo~