I get the idea - Spooky evil survey but First Person! - and there's nothing wrong with that, but it's a little over done and certain parts are just a little too goofy. Right as the tension is reaching a climax, all the lights go red and flickery and an alarm blares (another overplayed trope). You proceed to the next question; "Does the alarm scare you?" I personally answered no, - it was mostly just loud and I didn't have any context to make it scary - and so it abruptly stops. But the red lighting and ambient noise remain, leading me to the conclusion that the alarm only stopped because it wasn't scaring me. Like whatever supernatural entity trapping me just went "oh well if it isn't scary there's no point in keeping it going." If everything stopped and went back to normal it'd put me more on edge, like the tension reached it's peak and I was yet to feel the payoff; but instead I just went on to a few more scares and a "data collected on [[C://Users/Snek]]" ending. Some good ambience but nothing to write home about.
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