This was fun for what it is, the art is lovely and the concept of it is interesting. But the strange microtransaction model to buy a currency in order to purchase every single piece of extra was a strange choice for a VN. I'd have been happy to purchase a full and complete version of the game, despite the issues.

The English translation (I'm assuming it was a translation or written by someone whose first language is not English) was poor, with grammatical, spelling, punctuation and sentence structure errors that made certain moments that could have been funny or impactful fall flat. The references to celebrities are a stale kind of humor (and were not done well here, like it was an on-the-nose attempt at humor), and the most of the minigames and activities felt thrown in with no reference to them after the fact, they were fun but didn't actually matter. The inkblot test, the self-portrait, a few others would have been lovely to see come up again.

The romance aspect was cute and fun, and I'd have liked to see more romantic moments between the LI's and the MC. Maybe that's locked behind the microtransaction system? I'm hopeful that for the sequel, there's an option to just... buy the game. One payment for all the content. Especially if you hire a copyeditor or someone to help with the translations. 80% of a VN is its writing, having as many mistakes as this had is not something that should be overlooked at all. Please do consider investing in that, I think it would make your writing (other than the celebrity jokes, which can be funny but they felt tossed in and random for the sake of attempting comedy) much more enjoyable.