I love the story and the characters. Chloe is a cutie.

Peek is to look furtively. Peak is a mountain top or a max level of performance. Think of 'peek' as having 2 eyes and 'peak' as having the 'A' for a mountain or an arrow pointing up. 

Many writers seem have a problem differentiating between homonyms.

Wolves' eyes have round pupils. The vertical slit pupils look terribly wrong on the wolf girl.

It is written "Thou art his mother", not "thy art his mother." "Thy art is lacking in appeal" is an example of how "thy art" should be used. 

Quiet is less noisy and quite is used like very. The author wrote: "It is very quite" when he/she should have written: "It is very quiet." You can write quite quiet as very quiet.

Heroes is the plural form of hero, not hero's. "Hero's" is the possessive form of hero.

Does the writer use spellcheck? Nope, I didn't think so. It is brief not breif. If they had used spellcheck, it would have caught that error.

And don't use whilst. The British don't even use it much anymore. It's anachronistic and and annoying. It just sounds weird.

Ms. May should have said "Ms. Thurg", not "Ms. Penkins."