I honestly don't have a lot of thoughts on this one, especially since the story isn't complete yet. But I will say that I like what I read so far. The time jumps did admittedly feel a little random/jarring at times, but I was able to keep up. There certainly is some intrigue here, even with the incomplete story. The actual horror moments are pretty good. I even backed away from my screen a few times, and that's how you know you got good horror.
Needless to say I will read this when it's completed.
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