For starters, the English writing is a bit... off.

It's written forty, not fourty. Yep, I just got the red wavy  underline under fourty. So yes, fourty is incorrect.

It's "We will talk after we eat", not "We will talk after we ate."

The writer writes a sentence with just "promised" after the end of a paragraph or a sentence. It should be written "Promise" or "I promise."

Writing it as "swimming lessons" is correct, not "swim training."

Sun's face looks very unnatural.

Water is sparkly for pancakes? What are you writing about? It makes no sense whatsoever. I'm a lifelong cook, a chef and that concept is completely absurd.

The rain function of the shower has drops going... up?

Trains don't drive, they run. 

In my worst Alabama accent: "We is all fam'ly heere!"

Maddie has the best body and face out of all the girls. She is my personal favorite.

Cats have webbed feet and can swim quite well, but most cats don't like water. Tigers and Jaguars do like water.

The epilogue crashes and is completely unusable.