I am drawn to this setting and the dynamics between the three main characters is decent enough, but it does feel like it's written by an outsider looking in at the culture depicted, not to mention the broken foreign dialogue that doesn't quite make sense to a native speaker.

An addendum to this, now that the endings are out: It's alright. I think the story just sort of ends and it doesn't feel like there's much emotional payoff. The MC just sort of gets together with their love interest and the other rival just accepts that and moves on.