Love this. Only thing I'd change would be to put the bullet points for Volt's and Echo's personality and backstory stuff inside the boxes, so it's clearer they belong to those NPCs? Oh, and the map file on the .zip seems to be outdated, the one embedded in the HTML is different (and better) :)
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