Kind of insane and unhinged, but I like that? Honestly the ESLisms are a little hard to keep up with sometimes, and there's certain moments I'm unsure on what exactly the implications are, or the lore that's happening (i'm unsure if all witches have a curse of some sort, for instance, and if so, what the main character's are), but I still enjoy it, as a quaint little experience. There's only three characters but I really enjoy all of their designs, a really fun array of them. I also like the metaphors... when I can understand them. When the prose works, it works really well. Very fun, good luck on your next work!