I think this is quite well done from the animation perspective! Although it has some finer issues with it. You can see some weird pixels that make it sometimes rough.

Textbox is a bit too smol. I think it should have been a bit bigger for better readability.

From a story perspective, it works as a decent piece. The major problem is the dire need of an editor. There is a lot of grammar mistakes or weird sentences.

Nonetheless, if you wanna read a janky ride? Than can recommend it! PS: Wished the start had some music, cause I thought my computer was broken XD