From what I have played so far of this game (seeing as it's of course still in development, and early on enough), I like it a good amount. I feel like the story-line is decent, the character development is too, and graphics are of course good, but I do have one constructive piece of criticism on it -
I personally do not like or mesh much with the way the story drives you (the protag/MC) to effectively headhunt the serial killer/creep character, without giving you a choice to avoid it. Perhaps there is some choice I missed that would result differently, but, I guess I really personally wish there were a choice available to not pursue the douchebag, or, somewhere along the line, choose to back off of it, at least for a little while. I can think of quite a few different ways a situation like that could go and develop in and out of the favor of the protag by choosing to stop pursuing that guy. And it'd make it quite exciting in my opinion too, in multiple ways that'd really open a lot of options up as a writer/creator for the future of the story & character/relationship development, too.
That said, I fully understand that it's not my place, or should have anything to do with me & my personal ideas & concepts, and it's up to you as the writer, creator and dev. So keep doing what you want, my friends!
All in all, I really do enjoy what I have been able to play of this game, and I look forward to playing it further as it expands with each update.
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