the main story itself is excellent, but in the romance with Gabriel, i often felt like the MC was an unwelcome interloper between gabrial and belladonna, or simply a conduit meant to reconnect the two. at minimum, there should have been an option for the MC to end the romance after Chapter 10.(english is not my first language, so some phrasing may be awakard. i appreciate your understanding.)
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