Great work! As someone working on their own little horror story I've been studying other horror VNs and this one is definitely going in my little book of references. I was in a state of suspense from start to finish, and all of the scares genuinely got a good shiver down my spine. I especially enjoy the twist, though all I'll say on that end for future readers is that I definitely have to read it a second time knowing what I know now.
Looking forward to IMG_1697! <3