The only Two issues I can possibly lodge at this Awesome little novel is:  

1. (I know it's the whole point), but you can't say some form of "No Thanks" to any of their offers/scenes.  To me, it kind of makes him seem spineless, and you're unable to fully act out how each player would approach such propositions.
2. (Not really a gripe, and I can bet it's gonna be patched sooner or later), but...  the character images aren't consistent with each other, making it slightly confusing to know which version the devs were endorsing as the "true look".

Other than either of those;  5 out of 5!

(p.s.  I Thank you IMMENSLY for giving me the option to opting out of the "Femboy route"...)