First and foremost, this is a truly hidden gem of a visual novel. I'm honestly glad that I had found this, since it genuinely was an interesting story to read through.
So much so that the game mysteriously showed up on vndb! I wonder who's doing that was? ;3
I truly think this game should be more popular than it is, it's well-written, the few animated cutscenes are nice, and every time a clue clicked in my head, it felt rewarding to finally go back and see a path be unlocked.
this is also a testament to your ability to hide stuff, when i was done with the game i decided to look through the game files- And lo and behold, someone (Presumably, Psi) had been talking throughout all the branches, with ## hashtags. Truly a clever way to hide some extra flavor text and gives a bit more character to Lattice.
The only reason I hesitate to give this a 5 star is the inconsistent grammar. There are times where the dialogue / narration has some rather odd quirks in the way it's written (or complete typos), nothing that can't easily be fixed though.
(In fact I would love to proofread through the entire game and fix some of these inconsistencies, but that's just an offer)
Keep up the good work, I'm positive that if you keep making banger stories like this, you'll reach a much bigger audience.
...Also, Adrien is the best character <3
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