Absolutely fantastic story with (mostly) great visuals and absolutely incredible cast. Its very apparent the author has a knack for writing and did a lot of research and planning going into this project. The attention to detail and themes he explores are as in depth as they are well written. My only complaint would be some pacing issues. the author flits between segments of deep character growth for MC then on story progression and sometimes the character growth segments get a little.... wordy. As an AVN this also leads to few scenes between only a handful of the characters with currently not a lot of payoff for a lot of them. The adult scenes themselves are mostly well done but could have benefited from a few more options or camera angles to add variety. On the flipside this novel could function flawlessly without that content as its story is strong enough and going in a very interesting direction. I applaud the dev for that they've done so far and look forward to following artemis's journey.