Overall pretty stellar so far. Humor hits far more than it misses. Dialogue is good overall. Characters are amusing and interesting. Sure, MC has that isekai power-fantasy shit going on, but not obnoxiously so. Really? Slavery? A man of your talents? I need more shade thrown on the entire trope. Dude friends in my AVN? Femdude as an option? Truly, we are seeing the genre's peak.
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