I see what you're saying, and I agree to an extent, but simply on a gaming standpoint this is boring and frustrating. The art is decent, and cute without being distracting, and the 'plot twist' was really well done--but the gamplay is a push, especially with a lackluster story. You definitely have talent and passion, and you definitely have the means to do something great--but this is merely an interactive art piece--something I was not expecting to judge, and thereby had a more negative experience. If I were to judge it as art though, it would get a 4/5.
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