- The MC is insufferable in the first chapter. I understand it is on purpose but it makes it really hard to keep going. I believe there are other ways to build and asshole character without making the reader want to quit. (It doesn't help that the root feelings are alien to me but this is more a me problem).

- Choices aren't really choices. In the first chapter some choices simply don't have a real effect (game overs are irrelevant and a waste of time). At least it's easy to see the options that give points/advance the story without losing content.

- I have a problem with the core setting. The nature of their relationship is problematic as he's in a position of power. It helps he's very professional during business hours and he doesn't have real power.

- The development of the relationships have to be forced (ladies can't resist him somehow) otherwise we would be here forever or things would go a very different way (which isn't why we are here in the first place).

+ I did liked the development of Lexi relationship.

+ The story is pretty simple and easy to follow and although the stakes aren't that higher (if you can't relate to the MC like me) they exist. Things do get better after the first chapter, if you can survive it you are in for a chill time.

+ Girls are pretty, they look different and have personalities.