Total Maidness is a nice game with good H scenes. All the girls have their own little thing that makes them interesting. On the minor negative side :

- some H scenes are rather short, with only one round

- the H scenes really lack romance or tenderness (except for Iris)

- no option for romantic moments with each girl (wasn't the garden supposed to allow something?)

- at the end of the game, many of the interactions with the girls are on the same schedule (evening)

- the main story is very light and short

- we don't really know each girl's past

Here are a few suggestions for future games (since this one is finished):

- more background on each girl / each girl has a main story (like Mary)

- romantic moments (off / before / after H scene)

- fantasies with girls in wedding dresses

- pure romantic moments in fruity futures