I'm not very far in yet, so take this review with a grain of salt. Thus far, I'm enjoying the writing and characters, just wanted to mention that it's kind of distracting that the characters don't have much facial animation changes during dialogue. Makes the exchanges seem kind of flat, but that's my only criticism so far. Keep up the good work.
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