Art - incredible. Loved the aesthetic and interesting use of dialogue boxes!!! More VN should do this to keep the text dynamic!! (At least, I haven't seen it elsewhere.)
Music - actually enjoyable, considering I dislike most of the genre's OST.
Story - now here's the tricky part... could have worked if handled right. Dark, twisted rom doesn't equal toxic rom... where its predatory and gross. Likewise, replaying certain routes - would've been nice to have an instant skip to next choice. It becomes a pretty arduous task. Moreover, there's a lack of endings, let alone satisfying ones, (and CGs) in comparision to all the plot packed in. It ends up feeling like all work, no reward.
In the end I only played 3/4 of Heath's route, but knew it would be enough for me.
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