Overall very good! A furry vn with a female protagonist is rare and having it be about trying to get other people together instead of the MC with someone is unique. Only criticism I have is when the MC calls out Menzie for crushing on her dad the tone change is very jarring, but you mention you already know that in the extras, so that's good. Was gonna leave a 4 star but since you mentioned doing some improvements in the future, I'll leave a 5 cause it's only up from here!