Just saying this is good or thrilling doesn't feel like enough. Read through the script, went through the early version, now this and it just gets better every update. Know that this still is "unfinished", but it is already so well put together. Phowg's art pops with the colors, Crim's additions are an adorable contrast to the tone, RMR music for this is haunting and well utilized and your writing is well paced, gripping and feels organic.  I could gush about so many things in this, the changes made between this and the early version, but I've probably rambled enough on the earlier stuff. There is an end and that's part of the point of this novel, so I'll the end it here by saying great work to you all.