It has many problems, some of which are particular to the translation, but most are signs of amateur writing, information is delivered in part by convenience or lazy writing, characters can be described in multiple scenes by a single defining trait, emotions are very simplistic and dialogue is unnatural, some scenes, don't make sense in context and need an explanation, by the characters, these explanations often don't address the main issues, and don't justify themselves, some ideas are executed prematurely, these ideas could've worked, mostly because they're cliches, but the set-up isn't there, or the character motivation is shallow.

Not unenjoyable, but underwhelming