You ruined it with the constant insert of whatever relationship you have. Absolutely NO ONE ALIVE addresses people like that. 

Secondly. The twins can die, they are horribly written and a shitty experience seeing how you ignorantly refused to put a rejection choice on their disgusting existence.

Thirdly. What the actual fuck went wrong with your development of the MC? Why did you make the most annoying dipshit? Why did you fail so heavily on delivering ANY humor? How much of a total dumbass you have made the MC is just pathetic, not even trope level stupid. Just overall fucking mentally inept.