This gets a four star from sheer creativity. Like, dude, what the hell. That was incredible. It was a three star in my head, and then the platformer segment came and I was like nope this is awesome. The only thing preventing this from being a 5-star is that it isn't longer and doesn't have more interactive gameplay like the platforming segment. Actually, screw it, this gets 5 stars cause you submitted really early, so that content I was missing is excused. You should absolutely take this further, keep adding small gameplay snippets, polish the writing, add more customization options, let me pysically bash around the text in the terminal, give the narration more of a personality, keep making me lose the game. I will follow and come back in a few months to hopefully a more complete game. Best of luck!
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