I'll update if I end up liking it more, but so far the only thing I find appealing is some of the art work. Lot of spelling/grammar errors to the point of being distracting, the story just seems uninspired, and by far the greatest offender - the music. Getting hit with a 8 second or so loop of some of the worst audio I've heard in a long, long time. There are tons of free music libraries where something could have been picked at random from, and would have been an improvement. Thankfully, you can just mute the music. I hope the solution isn't as easy to come to as I continue through the game - just stop playing it. Edit: TLDR version:

Visuals: 3/5, more often than not better than average;

Story: 1.5/5, no early hooks and a concerning number of typo's;

Music: 0/5, muted it within 3 to 5 minutes.