Stellar: Total SCP vibes from the monster. The NPCs, map, setting and problem are all elegantly intertwined.

Not-So-Stellar: I'm not sure why one wouldn't just kill McCloud on sight. Also would have preferred a PDF version.

Overall: This is classic sci-fi monster horror. In the right hands it could be chilling, hilarious, or even both. The concept is simple but well executed! Great stuff.