This is a good first attempt, however MC has a very bad case of unbelievable behaviour. He makes no real reaction to his village being raided, that the wolves are committing war crimes against his fellow villagers or that he is now a slave/victim. He even takes "comfort" in his masters smell, something that would only happen if he was experiencing Stockholm syndrome and that takes time. You can like someone's smell, but finding comfort in your antagonist/s smell requires Stockholm or something similar.
Overall this seems like it is more of a sub/dom, slave/master fetish story than a serious story right now. So if you are looking for that content then this might be for you.
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