I'll try to be short and in general I really liked it.

Pros:
+ Cool image

+ Nice story

+ Few functionalities/oppurtunities in the future (e.g.: mobile phone)

+ Good and not annoying music/sounds

Cons:

- If possible would be better to have some more sounds/musics, maybe per scene where it may be relevant

- Not a negative point, but if possible maybe some animations would be good, but for me it's not a minus.

I really like the game, so hopefully author won't abandon it, you're doing well so far, wish you all the best (time, resources, support, etc.) to finish it as you imagined it to be.