Things i enjoyed:

-Memorable cute moments.

-The story is nice and wholesome.

-The artstyle is stunning (great job dude)

-The characters are all likeable, sexy and distinctive, and the humor is enjoyable.

-The character backstories are intriguing, believable and make me wanna play more, and i believe you will give the characters clear tasks/intentions.

-The interpersonal relationship issues/obstacles the characters will need to surpass in order to obtain a satisfactory ending to their stories are most likely to be a direct product of the backstories; This leads me to believe that you can derive a great route experience (and therefore, a great game) from their respective backstories, as the backstories contain sufficient highly exploitable material for good "drama" or story content.

Criticisms:

My criticisms are minor, for example:

When Jayce wanted to wake up Maccon (aka hunky doggy) by coughing, the spanish he spoke was confusing and strange; i mean, i assume senior is supposed to be señor but if that was the case, then he wouldn't have used the informal "estas bien?", but rather the formal "esta bien?" ("tu estas bien", "usted esta bien")

When Maccon entered the classroom and spoke spanish it sounded unnatural (it was all coherent tho) --->>>

"Siento llegar tarde!" (i'm sorry for being late) = this is better than the line in the game.

"Disculpeme profesor"  = profesor could be replaced by profe, which is more informal, but waaaay more common (i've never heard someone call a teacher "profesor" tbh), then again, it could also depend on Maccon's personality and your preference, but i would advise against it since this line itself is quite formal in its nature.

"Tenga esto como su primera advertencia" = This doesn't make much sense unless the teacher gave him something.

"Vea esto como su primera advertencia, ahora vaya y tome asiento" = This is more formal than the line in the game, but is much more natural as they haven't met yet therefore making using "tu" instead of "usted" always be considered rude and Zale seems to be a very corteous and traditional individual; and i've also seldom heard a teacher talk to a student using "tu" sentences instead of the "usted" ones.

The custom main character name is inconsistent = everyone called me Jayce at least once, plus other related problems i don't remember much.

I will keep a close eye on this project, cheers.