Maybe it could use some work? There's a lot of potential here! I love the drawing style and the fun premise. I bet that adding a few sprite options for the MC could spice it up a bit? I thought this was genuinely funny, but could be improved with some expressions. Though, I understand that you're keeping this nb friendly (fucking amazing!), so it would be a lot of work to do a fitting character design that didn't alienate anyone. And it would be even more work to make several sprite options.....

All in all, I thought this mini VN was pretty cool, but left something to be desired. (I'm so sorry! I really did enjoy the funny script and cute drawings!!!!) It can get boring pretty quick, for someone like me who likes to get at least a few if not all the endings. I think this game, if left as is, would be best played in-browser. For the amount of time it takes to download, extract, and run the game, it is a little sad that there is so little to it. The game doesn't have much replay potential, so you also have to go in and delete it from your computer after playing. I would have significantly preferred to give it a casual go right here on itch.io. 

I'M SO SORRY PLEASE DON'T TAKE THIS AS A NEGATIVE REVIEW. THIS GAME DID INDEED BRING ME ENJOYMENT AND MAKE ME SMILE. I TRY TO LEAVE AN HONEST REVIEW ON EVERY GAME I PLAY.  AND ALSO PLEASE DON'T FEEL LIKE YOU HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME AT ALL! KNOW NOTHING ABOUT HOW TO MAKE A GAME OR VN.

I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO WHAT YOU PUT OUT IN THE FUTURE!!!!!!