It is a shame that you were forced to make changes to the script. It makes the story not make sense a times. Also a shame that scrolling back in chat doesn't work. Missed many bits of story due to a twitchy clicking finger. Aside from that the art is decent and the story is superb. Hopefully you can work in a way to script choosing what relation we call the characters like how we can change their names, in time.
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