Other then speech errors, it was rushed, I would have liked to had more choice options, other possible suitors as well. The skip was offered but disabled, which I get as not to be mean but if a persons thinking to use it then the part they are in is not as entertaining as it was probably meant to be. The story line didn't exist, it was really just an outline of a story idea.

It was not long enough to allow you to attach to the characters or the story, it was simply  girl meats boy, boy is a jerk, girl slaps boy... the end. A romance should have romance, there was none in this. from his 3rd line to her we already figured he was going to be a jerk face as well.

Suggestions: Tighten up the story, give something to sink the teeth into and keep us wanting more. A nice roller-coaster ride through out. Give more options to chose from. liking that you that element and going with it are pretty much the same thing... then it just ended with me deciding to be the... well you know... don't want to ruin it. 

Perhaps adding in some cut scenes and filler to suite the more laid out story would help. (Also a personal note... its cringy to me to jump from animation to real life backgrounds and such. I simply cant get into a visual story like that. for me it brakes the flow of the story majorly for me.)

Whelp... that's all I got. with everything said... its far better then what I could ever do so its still a good job, and I really liked that there were multiple endings, just be a bit clearer on the path to reach those endings ( why and how we come to those endings as some made no sense how we got there.) I still liked it a bit so yeah.