This was an enjoyable experience, with its interlocking stories. It's good enough to get lost in for quite a while, so it's great to have the save and restore features. The sound design made for good illustrative effect. The crude typography and garish colors could use some work though. In places there were some strange expressions that didn't otherwise match the tone of the narrative, but the writing is well-paced for the most part. Overall, I can see why this is piece made the top ten in a competition. I'd recommed this one.
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