Have seriously been enjoying my time reading this visual novel. I love the story so far, as it has plenty of romance and at the same time having plenty of mystery happening around it.
I love how diverse and expressive each character is with their personalities each being very strong. I love those mini episodes too as they really gave a good glance into each of their lives and the parts of themselves we didnt fully see in the main story. Personally have only done Gil's route, he's been a very interesting character. I know his uhm,, personality, is strong. Though I would argue that I think you've done a good job making him out to be not as much of a creep as people make him out to be, personally I think it would be nice to see more of his caring side whether in future episodes or route updates, just showing more of the side that he really cares for Walter's well being and protectiveness of him. Or especially show more of that time around high school too cause I've heard many comment on the creepiness of him behaving that way towards a high schooling, so I think seeing more of their early relationship would be nice.
As for the story it's really been lovely. At first I thought it would just be a nice romance story which it very much has been, but then the story started getting really interested as they began talking about the families and especially what was talked about in Lars' episodes, really gave a ton of information and makes us ask a ton of questions which I really much can't wait to see.
The art style has been very lovely too, I really love the designs of all the characters, they're all veryyy well drawn. Besides them I would also like to mention that the CG have all been so lovely and each are beautifully done. Along with the beautiful title screens that we see.
Also really love how it's laid out. I love the character selection allowing us not only to read basic info but also allowing us to see our progress in regards to romance/friendship.
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