The story feels a little rushed in some places, but that's probably just the OCD side of me wanting a little more detail on some of the transitions and aftermath. If I really had any critique that's a negative is that Alana's part was too short and I wanted to know more about her and her story. What can I say I'm a sucker for a strong woman with a soft and kind side to her too. Considering the age of the story I'm not sure if there will ever be more, but it would be amazing to find out what happens next and where the plot is going.