Really love this visual novel so far and am excited to see how it comes along especially when we begin to possibly see more romance. Love the designs of the characters and how different they are physically and especially love how you've done the sports aspect of the vn when they are playing a game, how instead of it just being a blank screen you do that overview shot and show off what's going on in the game, really fun and creative.

I like the overall story too and think you've done a good job with how everyone interacts with each other, really showing off that they really are good friends, even with sometimes they butt heads on things on how they act and such. Am excited to see how you continue the story too as it seems we may start slowly slowly getting into the romance of it ,if that interaction with Marcus at the end hinted small tiny feelings. 

Also I saw you mentioned cutting some paranormal stuff to the story and I think that was a good call, could be an interesting concept but I think with how the story is so far, adding it would just be a bit much in my opinion and would probably end up confusing me especially if its being introduced so late.

Am excited to see how this story goes, keep it up <3