I simply ADORE this book. I have made my partner read it with me, and they are loving it too. Thank you so much for this amazing experience. As constructive criticism, i have nothing negative to add! I simply gotta say, the flashbacks being when Alex was in pain (waterboarding), or when Milo was actually distracted and thinking of those memories... Mwah, voila, perfecto. 11 out of 10 !! Keep on writting, i look forward to the next book!
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