Well, as far as abandoned FVNs go, its a real shame this' among them; so much potential.
Great art, great setting, great magic system, and a story that has a lot of potential, especially for 6 possible routes.
However... The MC is annoying AF; Like get over yourself and all your whiny-arse hang-ups regarding literally everything... This Fing twat can't even go to the bathroom without freaking out... And, ja, I get the whole Isekai setting means MC must be filled with an intense sense of social anxiety, mixed with guilt over something they barely witnessed, alongside a unnecessary dollop of denial (as if dwelling on the idea some omnipotent beings have any chance of being wrong 'bout why the MC is there makes his situation any better) even though everything's pretty freaking mundane AF.
Honestly, the MC acts like a virgin tweenager, fresh out of middle school, when, apparently, he's led a full life of college, moved out on his own, endured heartbreaks and hookups, even was working a corporate job—But the thought of communal showers/urinals makes him spaz out that I'm surprised he isn't just in a fetal position, rocking back and forth, 24/7 mumbling "I got hard, I got hard, I got hard" like they committed the ultimate crime and are going to Hell for it.
...But the MC aside, the other characters as well as love interests are actually kind of cool and, you know, functionally normal. Heck, the MC can even get Bohld all flustered and bothered, but, unlike the MC, it seems reasonable, normal, and typical of his character, whereas when the MC gets all hot and bothered—I get the feeling they're the type that'd take a crying selfie for Insta just to put #MeToo on it.
Nevertheless, if the FVN ever continues, I just hope the MC either gets rewritten like a functioning adult or, if nothing else, experiences tremendous character growth that isn't some kinda 7th Heaven-style SFW-cringefest.
Android version specific issues: QTE doesn't seem to work; I get a timer with the letter "c" but no where I tap, it always fails (which is a shame, cause I want the MC sitting on the Cat's junk, not the Cat sitting on the MC's anxiety-inducing-trigger-stick). Also, Android version needs a Hide button and, just as importantly, a unique Android app icon.
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