This was a fun lil visual novel, I adore how unique the artstyle is and how the color all blend and pop with one another. Gotta say, the LI's style is completely different from what I've seen and he's pretty unique and different, makes him stand out more. I think one of my thoughts about this is that the pacing felt a bit too fast for me? I know this is a demo and all but while reading through the dialogue there was no distinct feeling that MC was being hypnotized or any indicator. But that was just a main thing, the other thing I've noticed is that despite us inputting the name of the MC, characters still refer to us as "MC" and not the chosen name. It'd be funny if the MC's nickname is actually MC and we just fill in a name that starts with both M and C if that was the case.
I'd totally tell people that MC stands for Mentally Clueless But other than that it was a fun visual novel and I enjoyed playing through it!
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