Amazing game.  Lot of great scenes.  A narrative that keeps you interested.  If I had some notes: no scroll back (I often mistakenly doubleclick, missing text).  Visual novels normally allow you to scroll back some dialogue.  And I spent the first 40-60 minutes of this game clicking on stuff that doesn't do anything.  It might be a more pleasant experience if things that are interactable had a glow or a transparent highlight as you hover over them.  Good Linux support.  If Game.sh doesn't run for you try running 'nw' after making it executable.  Can't wait for more updates.  I'm giving this a 5/5.