"You have failed at all aspects of proper life."
A bit rough, but shows promise. Art is its strongest suit. Even with it being a short introductory chapter, got me interested enough to follow along.
There are parts where nothing will happen unless you press a key or button to advance, which can be confusing for the player.
No descriptions, and a focus on only dialogue might make things harder in the long run.
It's not perfect, but I like it. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
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